A NIGHT IN THE WATER TEMPLE

A NIGHT IN THE WATER TEMPLE

A Poem by kublakhan27
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Inspired by The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time. The clip of inspiration is below. 04 13 11 "When water fills the lake, shoot for the morning light."

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Who's unearthly pen of purpose
spiked the medicinal lingo of
my life's mission statement with
the sweet calligraphy of a
redeemer's destiny

On what grounds of anticlimactic
credentials was I plucked from
the frozen context of forest green ignorance
and assigned to this twitchy box of a bath house
and its drowned doors spiteful currents
self-appointed damsels and
sea dweller duds

This I ponder as a hero
pampers his beleaguered feet
beneath the towel of an opportune torch
and inquires of his whimsical pet pearl
why an instrument of heaven's orchestra
could not compose a path to a shoehorn

With everyday gadgets of the gods
he is coming for my heart
and I will beat him with it
till the destiny of a redeemer wraps
its existence around the black dimensions
of my inferiority and makes
for the morning light

© 2013 kublakhan27


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I don't really know much about The Legend of Zelda, but this is really nice. It's written so beautifully, and the words just express so much feeling.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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kublakhan27

8 Years Ago

Right on, I think I'm in the group already but I'll double-check :)
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Mizuki Tsukiakari

8 Years Ago

Yep, and don't forget to post in the forum if you want reviews :)

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kublakhan27

Nova Scotia, Canada



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My first book is out! Any comments that anyone may have to offer regarding my work would be deeply appreciated, as I'm yet to get a review. www.amazon.com/Waltz-Around-Swirls-Steven-Fortune/dp.. more..

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