LADY OF THE LATHER

12 02 10

The gloss of your kneecaps
advertise sweet skin summits
over scented bubble drifts

Toenails instinctively waltz
on unseen porcelain
while your shoulders occur to me
smooth as caramel syrup
and wayward pearls of sweat
incline me to follow your torso
down to the water horizon

Do I inquire or
do I imagine

A question deferred
till I mine the wet surface
and come up with handfuls of
bubbly treasure to send to you
with a swift breath
like showers of white rose petals

Reviews

[shallimarRose]

I just took a bubble bath last night with my candles and sparkling wine.. Is there anything better for a woman.. heavy sigh.. Well I can think of one.. lol
Very sensual write. I loved these lines especially..

"sweet skin summits
over scented bubble drifts" and

"Toenails instinctively waltz
on unseen porcelain
while your shoulders occur to me"

Love the way your mind drew picture of the bubbles over her body reflecting line snow on the mountains.. Wonderful piece. thank you for the rr.. shallimar

[kublakhan27]

I must admit that this one was aimed directly for a woman's heartstrings ;) I don't know much about women, so I had to draw upon a no-brainer for my concept haha It is a personal favourite though...it's one of my earliest attempts at subtle erotica, so I'm very glad you liked it :)

[B-poet]

Intuitive and intriguing. Her essence has attracted the best companions she truly seeks. Great work.

[kublakhan27]

Many thanks^^

[Adam M. Snow]

Very, very nice indeed, I truly love it

[kublakhan27]

Thanks so much^^

[That_Guy]

nice imagery. You made it so easy to picture everything.

[kublakhan27]

Many thanks^^