UMM...YEAH, A SENRYU

Inspired by Jacob's Automated Lover...07 25 14

Shot another blank

Target's safe this time around

When's the next issue?

Author's Note

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Hilarious you're a funny guy.



I loved that poem Jacob did
I remember this song from the 80's
I think it was the 80's not my favorite
but I see the humor.

thank you for sharing and your
kind review and comment you left.


Blessings. Benita/ Kindred poet

[kublakhan27]

Haha It's not my favourite either though I do like some of their stuff...I'm actually not that funny, my writing is 99 percent negativity in a variety of forms...I'd change that if I could but it's not me, nor is it my life in general haha I'm glad this one made you laugh though, thank you Benita :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're quite welcome was a pleasure to read. well I don't take much of anything personal much anymore even though I am not crazy about playboy but I do see the dark humor in this. I am quite funny bubbly person :) but you can be anything when you write I have written many silly poems. Blessings. Benita/ Kindred poet

[kublakhan27]

Neither am I (honest haha) but yes, when I do humour, it's either dark or satirical...I think this one is both :P Blessings :)

[Kenneth The Poet]

This is hilarious. Love the song, too.

[kublakhan27]

Haha Glad it made you laugh Kenneth.

[DIVYA]

Brilliant and funny! I loved it.

[kublakhan27]

Haha Glad it made you laugh Divya :)

[MsJewel]

Cute and clever. I love your sense of humor!

:) Julie

[kublakhan27]

Haha Thanks my friend, it makes me happy to hear that :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Oh come on, you don't expect me to believe you shoot blanks? This is great.

[kublakhan27]

Haha I'd love to offer a witty response but I'm still on my first coffee of the day...thank you KL.

[Einstein Noodle]

sarcasm and humor both hit the mark .. but sir ..

"We gotta get you a womaaaaaaaaaaaan!" :)
E.

[kublakhan27]

Haha A fitting response my friend, thanks E :)

[Einstein Noodle]

love ta love ya bro! .. (in a manly way of course)
:)
E.

[kublakhan27]

Haha Bro hugs all around :)

[Frieda P]

Ha two of my favorite poets here, no wonder you inspire one another....how did you get from the automated system to girlie magazines is what I want to know? Must be a 'guy' thang...Ha, great stuff.

[kublakhan27]

Haha I have no idea Mrs.R, must be a Dali thang ;D

[Frieda P]

HA must be....I thought you might have a clue yourself :D

[kublakhan27]

Nah, me and clues don't associate ;)

[Frieda P]

Shot another blank eh? ;)

[kublakhan27]

LOL You're funny love, let's not go there anymore k? ;D

[Frieda P]

Ha ha you started it.... ;P

[kublakhan27]

Haha *bows head* Yeah I did ;P

[Rita L. Sev]

Lol - haven't yet read Jacob's piece, but this one tickles the imagination!

[kublakhan27]

Haha I'm glad it did Rita :) Jacob's poem is pretty funny, funnier than this one haha

[Mark]

that is sad... Next issue?
Ummm... Go have a shower and get dressed before reloading ;)

Ohhh…. It’s a senryu…. sorry... thought it a question (laughing:)

[kublakhan27]

LOL I know, I should just go take a bath in holy water right now...I'd say thank you my friend but they're restocking the shelves, gotta run...

[Mark]

I read it as intellectual intercourse not taking seed ;)
but I’m naive in that way
or not
next issue please;)

[kublakhan27]

Haha Well it could go that way too ;)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

if you are shooting blanks,
Please press "uh oh"

you are funny, my friend...

very clever metaphor...

jacob

[kublakhan27]

haha Thank you Jacob, glad it made you laugh.