Perhaps

Perhaps

A Poem by Nautili
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reposting of an old one.

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Perhaps

I should have looked into your eyes.
And listened with an open mind.
I doubted your sincerity then. Now
I question my willingness to look inside. 
Perhaps

I should have taken my shield down,
allowed myself to feel.
Allowed what was twisted out of joint,
Time to straighten and heal.
Perhaps
 
I analyzed too much.
Talked myself right out of us.
Found the scales wanting and it was time to leave,
But what did quitting on us achieve?
Perhaps 

I am now wiser.
And would not take love’s kiss so lightly,
I should have hugged you more tightly.
And whispered in your ear,
The things I held about you so dear.
Perhaps.

© 2012 Nautili


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I really enjoyed this one - and you're right, it share this very universal theme with The Day We Never Met. I love your expressions in this piece - and ending each stanza with the title is just perfect! Excellent write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Perhaps! when one gets wiser he or she can always go back throwing their ego to the winds.
It is never too late to fall in love again. Lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very good, yes if only we could go back , where would we be?

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow!! This is really beautiful, and so full of emotion. Wonderful poem!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Perhaps, is a proverbial invisible wonder... it only appears when we don't really know what wisdom leads us in... So deep, so poignant. True felt. I love it, nice work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wonderful deep felt write. Times where we become still and scan the landscape of our decisions are good for the soul. They are even better to set the course for the future. Nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


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JRB
Just perhaps the words never spoken or an embrace never felt was the memories to keep and the wonderment was always the answer and never the question? Either why deeply written, Nice write

Posted 12 Years Ago


I've found similar situations and I will say,if your heart is kept in a shell,
yes,you are protected and safe,but may not feel the warmth of the sun,
or rain on your face,or the slightest touch of loves kiss on your lips...
some will always wonder,
"What could have been"...if only...perhaps...some day...
then you end up like me writing sad stuff about pains of lost loves,
wanting somebody to help you make new memories and help you forget the past.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Time is too short , always tell what you feel , love with your heart ...it could be it will be too late ... dont ever miss it

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Nautili
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