Fruit of the Vine

To pluck from the vine

                and pop into my mouth…

the snap of the skin 

               between front teeth

and the sweet juice

exploding,  

           dripping down

                         from parted lips…..

ahhhh…..sweet grape. 

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Oh what a sweet enticing write! Delectable... sweet on the taste buds...with a bit of a naughty bite! ;)

[Chris]

very sensuous... an intent-full image.

Eroticly phrased, I like the use and essence of fruit used in poems...It has something particular... nice write!

[Ed Hart]

i can see it...here, let me daub that for you

[Lawrence Parlier]

A nice balance of the tactile and the visual!

[John Fitzgerald]

very sensual. impressively economical use of words. and intersting structure, dripping like the sweet juice.

[Revery]

huh, is this really about grapes, lol. So sexy, yum, sweet and juicy like that grape. Wow the parallels run from message to metaphor to the poem it's self to you.

Great write, this one is going into the favorites.

[Revery]

I added a photo to my review. :)

[JRB]

This writes makes my inner nature; want to be a grape, in the hands of a passionate devourer, as the writer states, sweet grape, is the dream, a passion fruit to be,,,nice write

[An owl on the moon]

There is a passionate, sweet plucking here that sends that delicate flavor flowing word by word over lips and dancing on the tongue... Used to have grape vines in California... missing them now.

[LonelySoul]

let me guess...green,Lady Finger,seedless ?
now I gotta go to the store and buy some grapes...thanx alot...
dang munchies anyways...puttin on my shoes...keys?where are the keys?