History repeating

History repeating

A Poem by god is not great, I am

Shh, pay attention.

If you had been you would have already seen this coming.

Can't you see it?

She’s starting to disappear again.

We should have know it would happen again.

And now while the rest of us hold our breath

fearing what we know will come next

she breaths easy,

at least for now.

But to her thats all that matters

Now is all she could ever have hoped for

and she’d be a fool to wish for anything better,

to believe she could ever have more.

© 2011 god is not great, I am


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I feel so much loneliness and pain flowing through these words, but yet, a hope that today is good enough for now. This is heartbreaking but beautiful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so heart-wrenching, great job!

I believe she could have more.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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god is not great, I am
god is not great, I am

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No God. No food. No sleep. That’s all you really need to know about me. Atheist, Anorexic, insomniac. I am sure we have very little in common. Another note: My favorite writer ever- Charl.. more..

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