Coffee, Cigarettes, and Adderall .

Coffee, Cigarettes, and Adderall .

A Poem by god is not great, I am


The A team.

Over energized, and underfed.

The longer you stay awake, the easier it gets.

You’ll sleep when you’re dead.

Forget food, it’s always been your ruin.

Survive on speed instead.

© 2011 god is not great, I am


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I just love the last two lines. They're blunt to a perfect degree.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Been there, done that, glad it's in the rear view. "you'll sleep when you're dead" no doubt! Enjoyed reading it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This poem is pretty much my life right now. It is finals week and I am living this poem. I love the length, short and to the point, but still able to portray the ideas creatively. Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is very clever. I think it's the perfect length and the rhyme scheme really works. It almost sounds like a song...


Posted 12 Years Ago


This is really good, describes my life a few years back. Short but sweet.

Posted 12 Years Ago


intersting stuff, love this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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god is not great, I am
god is not great, I am

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No God. No food. No sleep. That’s all you really need to know about me. Atheist, Anorexic, insomniac. I am sure we have very little in common. Another note: My favorite writer ever- Charl.. more..

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