Game Of Life

Game Of Life

A Poem by laceyjane23
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Life is a game we are forced to play, Whether you win or lose is up to you.

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Look into this mirror, tell me what you see.
Do you see the person I call me?
I see a life filled with promises, hopes, and dreams.
Everyone says life isn't what it seems.
 
they say....
Just move forward, never look back.
Look out for no one but your self.
Keep your life on track.
 
Think only of the good times, and never the bad.
Think of all the smiles and fun that you've had.
 
Advice is everywhere, be careful whose you take.
Be open-minded and listen.
Remember everyone makes a mistake.
 
Don't judge others too harshly for theirs, cause it could come back to you.
Listen to others with an open heart, There's nothing you can't do.
 
Take risks in life.
Fall in love every chance you get.
be content with the choices you've made.
Even the ones you regret.
 
Live life to the fullest, you only get one shot.
Hold your head high, walk with pride, and give it all you've got.

© 2008 laceyjane23


Author's Note

laceyjane23
please ignore all grammar and punctuation errors, my spell checker is not working. These are just a few of the things people have told me about life.

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wow this is nice ,i have heard advice all my life,i came to know the only advice i should listen is from my own heart and my own mind,these will tell me where to go and where not..
i have loved all my life,but i was hurt again and again,but you always learn,take a fall then you know to take care later,yes life is a wonder ,live it all if you are ready to its blunder,walk through her streets,climb up them moutains,walk down her vallies,only if you are ready for her hits for she will show her goodies for those who are ready to play ,fall and may break ,they will take it all to know her real secret,again this is really wonderful,very nice writing

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is wonderful. Such good advice too. If everyone would take a page from your book...it would be such a peaceful world. Well written. Thanks for sharing.
Going to my favs...right now.
Babsie Bee xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow this is nice ,i have heard advice all my life,i came to know the only advice i should listen is from my own heart and my own mind,these will tell me where to go and where not..
i have loved all my life,but i was hurt again and again,but you always learn,take a fall then you know to take care later,yes life is a wonder ,live it all if you are ready to its blunder,walk through her streets,climb up them moutains,walk down her vallies,only if you are ready for her hits for she will show her goodies for those who are ready to play ,fall and may break ,they will take it all to know her real secret,again this is really wonderful,very nice writing

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great advice you've shared, but you forgot one hon... don't forget to make time to smell the roses :D

Faerie Blessings!

--faerie whisper (breaking the silence...)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 2, 2008

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laceyjane23
laceyjane23

Mesa, AZ



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Well lets see, I am 28 yrs old, and i love to write. I write poetry, lyrics, stories, articles, and I am currently working on my first book, and it has been quite an experience! I love life and I beli.. more..

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