Fight for you

Fight for you

A Poem by lindsay

The classic story of boy meets girl
is the game we all  play.
Star crossed lovers.
Taking care of each other.
You always had something beautiful to say.

As I met you boy, I found myself loss for words.
I found you to be of a different kind
and this I found to be absurd.

We found a comfort and stood by each other like sticky glue.
Our eyes said everything.
I will fight for you.

Though there was another.
Your lover.
Whose meaning to you was minuscule.
My actions said it all.
I will fight for you.

There came upon a night
where I knew sulking would ensue.
I came up to your window.
I will fight for you.

As I lost my friend and you held me so true.
Took me underneath your arm.
I will fight for you.

When you left for your job.
We knew it would be difficult for us to continue.
But you promised me the world.
I will fight for you.

Years later,we left off where it all began.
You dropped down one knee
and grabbed my hand.

Love is all we want to do.
I will fight for you.

© 2010 lindsay


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This was beautiful, wonderful job. We all want someone who is willing to stand up for us when that is needed.

Very nice.
Antonio :)


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The repetition is beautiful. This is very well done. And your word choice is fantastic. Although, it does seem like maybe an additional stanza or two added to this would help bring the story together.
But overall, awesome job. Keep it up

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a wonderful and beautiful write here. I like this I thought t was kind of passionate really. Well written

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely poems I must say, not a fan of love poems, but this was consructed very well and has a very good rytham, I love each andevery stanza with each line. very simple and love, keep up the great work

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very beautiful poem. This is the way it is I think. I love the passionate words here. The words that say "I will not give up, no matter what." Excellent piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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lindsay

Mentor, OH



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Hey, I'm Lindsay.I'm majoring in Creative Writing and Graphic Design at Ohio University. I like meeting new people.I want to travel and try everything.Writing is everything to me.I am really passionat.. more..

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