Pretty Stars

They are everywhere...

Pretty stars that fill the sky.

I always see them every night.

I love the way the comets play

in fitful moments; wishes made.

Now a comet flies high and by

and I wish the time good-bye.

Comets make wishes come true

makes me wish the rain were due.

I wish the rain would come tonight

because it makes my sky so light.

The dancing trees make me so glad

that saytr's hear the wish I've made.

I wished for you to come to me.

To be whom I wanted you to be.

Reviews

[Tim]

Excellent poem Faelyn, I loved the way you weaved your words together so nicely. I like it.

[jhed]

nice poem about star..it's my favorite shape actually..star..keep wwriting!

[Undying Glory]

nice work. it's really beautiful and vivid. awesome stuff and keep it up!

[maryjaneuy]

i simply like this. :)
keep on writing. :)