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Personification of Teptation

Personification of Teptation

A Poem by Jillisa Carrion
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A passionate momment of observation...Breathe against you ear whispers life’s pleasures…that would make most suicidal minds breath life again

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Smooth and Flexible, youthful and tight

 The skin that reverberates with every given and taken blow

Agile-forcefulness-thick wristed powerful hands that grips its form around your waist,

His musculature, Great like that of Grecian aesthetics, curving like boundless hills

Breathe against you ear whispers life’s pleasures…that would make most suicidal minds breath life again

The lustrous sweat rolling slowly off the marble skin; face stern and affectionate

“You truly are the Personification of Temptation!”

 

© 2010 Jillisa Carrion


Author's Note

Jillisa Carrion
the underlining message could be considered erotica if not sorry i shall repost as a different genre none the less please speak your mind!
personally this is the best poem i think that i have ever written ... i hope you enjoied it

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Added on April 19, 2010
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Tags: temptation, love, sex, passion, sexual intrigue, art, breathe, life

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Jillisa Carrion
Jillisa Carrion

bronx , NY



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i love to read, write, swim, and draw. i am currently learning how to ballroom dance and hopefully begin to learn fencing :) more..

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