Reminds me of you

Reminds me of you

A Poem by Jillisa Carrion
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a short prose of longing passion

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The air that fills my lungs reminds me of you

Unbound and delishious

crisp as a crackling fire

A fire that is ignited an ignition shared between us it burns

I lose my dignity at the sight of you

Dream of actions I wish to perpetrate unto you  

The air that fills my lungs is your breath

Held in the stillness of time without shame

I wish to make love to you give myself over to your perfection

The air that fills my lungs reminds me of you

Penetrating me as I penetrate you

The air that fills my lungs reminds me of you

© 2010 Jillisa Carrion


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"I lose my dignity at the sight of you
Dream of actions I wish to perpetrate unto you
The air that fills my lungs is your breath"
~~this entire poem is gorgeous but this line is beautiful !~~

:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Jillisa Carrion
Jillisa Carrion

bronx , NY



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