These Scars

These Scars

A Poem by LapseOfMind
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A poem about scars. Contest Entry for the 10 word poem contest.

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Please just
Touch these eyes
To remind
Me
This scar

© 2015 LapseOfMind


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concise, but those memories are seen by the eyes inside...the scars seen most are in there.

Posted 8 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

8 Years Ago

Yeah, most scars are inside. That's why I write most often, to them heal...and to remember .
Good ten word poem. The short ones are very difficult.

Posted 8 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

8 Years Ago

Yes they are lol thank you much
VALORMORE DE PLUME

8 Years Ago

You have great talent and I like your style.
LapseOfMind

8 Years Ago

Thank you :) it's all of you writers out there that inspire me. I took a year off writing completely.. read more
A lot said in so few words. Scars are the honored gifts of love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Added on August 30, 2015
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LapseOfMind
LapseOfMind

Seattle, WA



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