SALVATION

This is a poem that just came to me one day and I feel like I did not even write it.

the foundation of spirit is beyond the light
it can be seen even in the darkness of night
feel it in your heart and see it in your soul
salvation of love is the only goal

angels may appear to you in a moment of distress
the beating heart holds all the truthfulness
remember lies are deceit  and torment is pain
thunder is lightning and snow is rain

merging together and falling apart
the soul separates again from the heart
dearly departed into the skies above
all fear vanishes into final love

prayers may go unheeded or so you think
for what is a chain without a link
smiles are forthcoming to all the sad faces on earth
as time is at hand for the rebirth

Reviews

[Amber.]

Beautiful Poem. It's a Masterpiece!

[Thinker1]

I really enjoyed reading this piece! I had great descriptive words in it, and it really brought the piece to life! One thing I must say, even though I thoroughly enjoyed this piece, is that I did notice that it did not seem to have a point. But not all poems have a point, so this is neither a good thing or a bad thing, just something I wanted to point out. But it was a great piece over all, and I hope insperation comes to you again!