losing Everything..

well i am broken

to say the least..

now if you would think of me

id be at peace.

but the cuts were too deep

the pain was too much

and for once i thought

i couldnt f**k this up.

well i guess im wrong

and you could say im sad

and the emptiness hurts

but its not that bad

the pain only makes me cry

and it bleeds from within

but its not that bad

im just trying to cope

with losing all i had.

but i guess i was blind

i guess i was wrong

ill never be that note

in your beautiful life song

so goodbye for today

and goodbye for now

i guess i could cope

but i dont know how..

Reviews

[.Bunnie.]

Aww...emo-ness at its best!!!!! ^.^ This was so cute, I absolutely loved it. Great job!!

[Georgia Gypsy]

such a sad ballad, dark and brooding. well done. once again when i read your work i see it as a movie in my head, not all poems do that....great job!

[Dominic Rosales]

Very good, again on of the best poems I have ever read. I'm speechless to say the least. I can't even think of a word that I know that can describe how powerful this poem is. Great job, keep up the good work.

[Bran the Broken]

simple and sad. written with a very darkly charming melancholy elegance.