Emotional Sanity

written for a friend,expressions of Eternity

Emotional sanity ...

 

purge my soul in an ocean blue...

 

tips of waves crashing...

 

white in color and lashing out...

 

stabalize my life for now.

Author's Note

written for a gift to a friend..anonymus

Reviews

[zig]

this looks more like tanka than haiku, which is fine, i love tanka, i havent read any in a very long time, so this was very refreshing. again, you end with bit of a stunning juxstaposition, the crashing and the lashing, and then stabalizing, nicely done. really enjoyed this.

zig

[Phibby Venable]

there is a nice sense of grounding here even in the crashing. very fine.

[J.V. Stanley]

This reminds me of watching the wind capture the waves of Lake Superior the other day. I find it both relaxing and watching the waves has a restorative quality to the soul. I suppose its the rhythm of the waves and the sound of it crashing upon the shore. beautiful work

[Don Shaw]

Nice poem, the beach is a great place to restore sanity.

[Desert Dreamer]

There is balance to be found in the ocean waves, beautiful.

[Silent Serenity also kn..]

Wow intense actually! Emotional sanity is my favorite part for I feel that every day!
Stabilize my life for now......finding an inner peace i guess would have to be done!
Great write my poetic friend!

[An owl on the moon]

There is truly both a beauty and a fierceness found in the sea.. and in this powerful metaphor as well. Peace and passion, mingling all into a person who can find a balance in the seasons of life.

[Raven Starhawk]

This is a segment of something much more. Each word you listed here in its order is a deeper shade of you. I think you did a great job.

[Emily B]

I guess we all get there, sometimes, the waves are harder on some of us.

I imagine that the gift was much appreciated.

[WatashLegend]

Powerful write, soothing and refreshing, well done.