Emotional Sanity

written for a friend,expressions of Eternity

Emotional sanity ...

 

purge my soul in an ocean blue...

 

tips of waves crashing...

 

white in color and lashing out...

 

stabalize my life for now.

Author's Note

written for a gift to a friend..anonymus

Reviews

[zig]

this looks more like tanka than haiku, which is fine, i love tanka, i havent read any in a very long time, so this was very refreshing. again, you end with bit of a stunning juxstaposition, the crashing and the lashing, and then stabalizing, nicely done. really enjoyed this.

zig

[Dove]

Very sweet

[Audrey Howitt]

Lovely write and lovely gift.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Sweet.

[An Ordinary Woman]

a lucky friend you have- this is sooo lovely!

[Emily B]

there seems to be something in the sea today . . .