Please

I can't escape,

This burning pain.

There is no where to run,

There is no where to hide.

The anguish rushes in,

like an angry tide,

and rips me apart,

beyond repair.

Please,

Someone help me,

Hold me tight,

and don't let go,

Please, not tonight,

Pull me safely,

into your arms,

And I beg you, dear,

Please don't depart,

Don't leave me alone,

here on my own.

Author's Note

Random poem I wrote in journalism today.

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Emotionally elect, and breath taking, well done, slightly crass with theatrically slight!

[Rayne Stanton]

beautiful emotion :)

[Dai Edenburough]

Awesome emotion! I get a HELLA strong sense of the need of support from someone that you long for. TELL HIM TO GET HIS REAR IN GEAR AND GIVE YOU SOME COMFORT!!!

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Raw emotion, that feeling of not wanting to be alone. Good poem my friend.