Weed Virginity

Weed Virginity

A Poem by Althelia Marie Caine

Sitting in the back seat,
Windows rolled up,
Watching him put the flame to the bowl,
He breathes in for two seconds,
Then takes the pipe from his lips.
Holding the sweet smoke in
before he exhales slowly,
Smoky sweetness filling the car,
He passes the pipe to
the girl sitting next to him.
She repeats his actions
n perfect grace,
She passes the pipe back to me.
Holding it awkwardly in my shaky hand
I put it to my pips as 
he leans back to light
the bowl.
I inhale the sweet smoke
then he takes the pipe
from me.
He watches worriedly as
I hold the smoke in
then exhale when he 
tells me its time.
They watch me with worried,
anxious eyes for my reaction.
I sit passive for one long moment
before letting a choked giggle slip passed my lips.
He smiles at me
and wraps his arms around my waist 
from his place in the drivers seat.
He laughs as he says he stole the only virginity I had left.

© 2011 Althelia Marie Caine


Author's Note

Althelia Marie Caine
Really random poem and the first time I smoked weed

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My Dear Writing Friend,
I was very well written and thought provoking write. I wished I had not lost my alcohol virginity as it in time almost destroyed me. With this write the reader can easily see, hear, and smell the poem. I was very impressed.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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My Dear Writing Friend,
I was very well written and thought provoking write. I wished I had not lost my alcohol virginity as it in time almost destroyed me. With this write the reader can easily see, hear, and smell the poem. I was very impressed.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Althelia Marie Caine
Althelia Marie Caine

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