life

very depresing... but i got the idea off of another friends poems

I'm taking off my mask

I'm leaving mt past

I dont need any consent

I'm dont with the judgment

My life's in lock down

I'm starting to drown

 

I'm leaving without a trace

As the tears fall down my face

The wind flows through my hair

I'm living without a care

So this will be my good-bye

As i begain to die

Author's Note

tell me what you think

Reviews

[Abhishek Ramkissoon]

there were days when i felt what you wrote. its nice to read. very nice.

[..]

i really love your first stanza. also liked the last two lines, I can feel the emotions.

[TheFemininePad]

The second line should read "I'm leaving my past". Personally I like this poem. I sue to feel this way myself, and it takes time to see the positive things in life. Learning to channel depression into something good is a challenge, but it helps me a lot when I use to be depressed. Great job writing this poem!

[Coffee Vampier]

I think its a lovely take off of the poem Masquerade! A different perspective is just the way humans are. great write Mel :) haha yeah i think i will call you that from now on ;)