Stuck In Well

You pulled her out from a well of mess,

She stuck in there,giving up on her well.

She didn't want to move up from there,

She just feared to just go back in there.

She was not scared of giving up on her tears,

She feared for her to again tear.

She was stuck in a hopeless place,

She didn't want to come out of the phase.

You still  stuck along with her,

You knew she was not what she was showing up.

You held her side at all times,

You never let her give  up on time.

Today she's again stuck back,

But in a place deeper than that.

She is a mess all over again,

But now it is worse than any other day.

She has given up on all her hopes in life,

She now denies to give herself to life.

She had put all of her to you,

She trusted you,she went to be with you.

You were to make her forget her past,

You are here leaving her in an indefinite path.

Reviews

[Misery]

यह हमें बाहर खींचने के �™िए किसी अन्य के �™िए उम्मीद कर एक ही स्थान में फंस जाएगा भयानक है।

मैं इस बारे में आप नहीं है प्रिय कवि की उम्मीद है।

[The Girl]

I am sorry i could not understand your review!

[Misery]

So sorry.
It should say: "It is terrible to be stuck in one place waiting for someone to rescue us. I hope this poem is not about you, dear poet".

[The Girl]

It ain't.. but surely while writing this i learnt lessons to life.

[Misery]

Those are the best kinds of poems, the ones that help us see clearer and deeper into the mysteries of this life.