Abyss

Abyss

A Poem by lei

forsaken in the abyss of affection
she was forced to endure the pain of being loved
each caress left scars
upon her drowning soul.
 
her heart so fragile
was broken countless times
And no matter how he molded it
It deepened the flaw
 
her anguish reached into the beyond
and her heart yielded to despair
she mourns for her soul
buried in the abyss of his affections
 
 
 
May 20, 2012

© 2012 lei


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Spritly and simple, a well read piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Powerful. Nice piece...heart breaking but beautifully expressed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


So deep and emotional with so few words. Love is but a time during life where you realize that someone else's life is more important than your own.

Posted 12 Years Ago


We give ourselves...our greatest gifting - and only afterwards realize we held reservations and paid no attention. And if we have no reservations then there is no regret for sharing our all... just prayers that it is enough!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love hurts, as indicated beautifully through your words. I loved reading your poetry, rather captivating, adds dimension to love, greatly enjoyed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


To stop the hurting sometimes burial is a must.
A piece with bitter tone to which I hope the speaker will recover.
Nice write!


Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the way you made love a affliction. The soft touches left more pain then pleasure. No weakness in the amazing poetry. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Brilliant pice! It is very powerful! Keep writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This makes an impact.
Keeps the reader hooked till the very last word.
The last stanza is particularly powerful.
Beautifully written.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Powerful and provocative. This piece reminds me of so many people I have known in my life, whose damage made them almost irresistible to me. Like a beautiful fire that threatens to burn but the need to touch it is overpowering.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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