Vive la Mort

A short little poem I wrote on a whim

How ironic it is

That we spend

Our entire lives

Convincing ourselves

That we are hiding

From death

When in fact

We are chasing it

Author's Note

For those who don't know, the title means "Long Live Death"
As always, any and all constructive criticism is appreciated.

Reviews

[SeekingMeaning]

Mmm.

I wanted to write something more than "mmm" but that's all my brain is giving me. Good stuff!

[Liefje]

thanks :) your comments make me happy

[EverleafOwl]

Woah. Read it, and had to sit there for a little, because its so TRUE and your wording is really cool in this! Love the langage! (Latin? Spanish?). A very neat touch!
A short-n-sweet poundering that sings it's rythmn queitly: amazing! X)

[Liefje]

Thanks so much! Your comments are always so flattering :) The title is French

[EverleafOwl]

Oh, i was WAY off! That's ok; it was a suburb idea! Why, thank you! You deserve such awesome comments! :D