A Poem by lily platycorn

I liked this guy so much.He finally was going to ask me he met my older sister, who has always been better than me.He instantly liked her more and ignores me now. He asked her out and she said yes.

Does it hurt
This much
When someone you
Thought you
Trusted comes 
Steals what you thought was yours
And leaves you
With their goods
Does it hurt this much
When you think you’ll die,
Withered, never being able to breathe
Knowing that with a single swoop they
Grabbed everything that you worked for
Dreamed of
Thought of every day
Does it hurt this much
That now it is gone because
Someone you thought
You loved
Told everything to,
Shatters your dreams
With a single laugh
Captures the heart
Of something you hoped of
But now can never be yours
Does it hurt this much
When your heart breaks

© 2011 lily platycorn

Author's Note

lily platycorn
Please comment, did you ever feel this way?

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Added on January 30, 2011
Last Updated on January 30, 2011
Tags: shattered, broken, dream, love, sad, depression, depressed, dead, trust, hurt, alone, lost


lily platycorn
lily platycorn

stroudsburg, PA

i am a thirteen year old girl. i love writing novels and poetry. i have written one novel (150 pages) and lots of poetry. more..

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