Eye of the Sorm

it makes no sense and i dont really like it lol, read it at your own risk

Ive always avoided direct contact
Never giving my body the chance to really react
But never once have I been this torn
So forget it, I’m walking into the eye of the storm

Let it rip and tear me apart
Its been my choice all from the start
Grand opening, grand closing
Ive changed so much from all of this posing

I cant be what you want I cant be what you need
The flower can never grow if you shade the seed
Ill never be me if you always try to make me into you
But il always be damaged, this much is true.

Author's Note

meh.

Reviews

[Noah E. Furtah III]

Personally, I love it this piece. I can really relate to what you're saying. Well, used to. Today, I couldn't care less what people think about me. This poem is officially a personal favorite.

[Akina]

I relly liked this poem, great job!
thanks for sharing.
Akina

[-Adam-]

So of my favorite poems comes out in 5 minutes, they usually sound a lot like this. Those are when, what you really want to say, gets to come out... Very nice!

[Brandon]

I like it, short , sweet and to the point.

[17thWhitePrince]

wow ... very very nice ... I loved the way it was all written and the words that you chose as well were just perfect ... a very very good piece indeed ... I liked it ... and it showed that you weren't happy and that you were just tired and frustrated ... it was really really that good I must say :)

[Kelley]

Loved the lines.......

"I cant be what you want I cant be what you need
The flower can never grow if you shade the seed"

Awww this wasn't that bad Courtney.
Maybe there was to much rhyming in it.......?
I liked it all the same.

Kelley

[nostal]

Wow. I liked it.