That boy.

That boy.

A Poem by Juliet Ray
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As I said, I'm a hopeless romantic...this is about my latest hope.

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That boy...
has got a hold on me.
There is a collar around my neck,
Choking me with every attempted breath.

All that boy has to do
is speak, 
And I am hanging on his every move.  

That dark hair
That innocent look
Yet, I know that his heart
I have not shook.

All the talk
The smiles
The dancing
It was all fun and games 
for that boy.

But, little does he know...
that boy has got me hooked. <3

© 2010 Juliet Ray


Author's Note

Juliet Ray
it was quite quickly written...it was an idea i got that i quickly felt the need to jot down. please read :)

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Something that makes one's heart flutter. At one point in time, we do feel this. Heavenly. Keep writing.

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love it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww i loves this:]

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this! As the person below me said your style of writing I absolutely love! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it. Im relating to this as we type:) I like your style, ill be sure to read more

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Added on December 17, 2010
Last Updated on December 18, 2010
Tags: love, boy, girl, dance, talk, breath, relationships, sex, smile, dark, handsome, hair

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Juliet Ray
Juliet Ray

Saskatchewan, Canada



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I'm an interesting person. I'm unique and have always loved writing. I am kind of a hopeless romantic, as you will notice in much of my writing. In the recent past, I have gone through some tou.. more..

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