Hmm. Not sure what to say about this one. I admit, I'm not exactly sure what you're attempting to convey here. At first glance, it looks like word salad, but I know it has a deeper meaning. Ordinarily, I can glean meanings from stuff quite easily, but you've stumped me with this one. Good job. :)
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
The vast majority of us are more likely to make up tiny differences from a familiar set of circumsta.. read moreThe vast majority of us are more likely to make up tiny differences from a familiar set of circumstances than ever truly choose to be inherently different. This concept is true across the majority of social situations and is probably why we aren't more objectively collaborative regardless of field... we are too busy justifying our own place and situation than to commit to objectively and altruistically improving it on any kind of large scare
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4 Years Ago
I see. You sound as though you've dabbled in psychology. That sounds like exactly the kind of explan.. read moreI see. You sound as though you've dabbled in psychology. That sounds like exactly the kind of explanation a psychology student or expert would give. Have you?
4 Years Ago
We all dabble in psychology. You just did it by asking me that.
But whether I did or .. read moreWe all dabble in psychology. You just did it by asking me that.
But whether I did or did not study psychology or otherwise systemically enhance my knowledge in any field is irrelevant.
Does what I have to say have merit or does it not? It it does, why so? If it does not, why so?
4 Years Ago
I'd say what you've said does indeed have merit. In fact, I think I'm one of the ones you've mention.. read moreI'd say what you've said does indeed have merit. In fact, I think I'm one of the ones you've mentioned. I prefer to do my own thing in life. I think we all do to a degree. Some moreso than others.
4 Years Ago
It doesn't really matter either way. Consciousness and material station is pretty much a crap shoot.. read moreIt doesn't really matter either way. Consciousness and material station is pretty much a crap shoot... the spectrum is so wide it's almost impossible to grasp. There once was a time when homosapiens were an endangered species; and what saved us way back then is a set of traits we no longer understand.
4 Years Ago
I agree. We could know everything there is to kinow, and still know nothing at all about anything of.. read moreI agree. We could know everything there is to kinow, and still know nothing at all about anything of any real value. I've always believed that. In any case, have a good night. :)
Knowing everything would probably mean value would lose all value; I will never stop believing that .. read moreKnowing everything would probably mean value would lose all value; I will never stop believing that it's important to be stupid sometimes. If we already knew, meaning would lose it's purpose. Without a cause for effort/struggle there is no cause for life.
4 Years Ago
Maybe. I guess there's no point in worrying about it, right?
4 Years Ago
There's no point in worrying about having no point. It's already a false argument (the question cre.. read moreThere's no point in worrying about having no point. It's already a false argument (the question creates the purpose)… kinda sorta.
Thanks for the read request on this poem. At first read I was confused, but something about it made me want to read on, and by the end, I wanted to reread it, so I did; like five times. The poem is chewy and keeps me coming back for more. It demands to be read out loud with a rhythm. I love the line breaks and the punctuation (except the unnecessary apostrophe; get rid of it). I especially love the the stanzas between the first and last; they are fun to read and to interpret. The speaker of this poem was relatable, and some of my chronic anxiety feels validated by these words. Good poem
Posted 3 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Years Ago
Thanks. I value you reviews more than most.
Sorry about the apostrophe. One day I'l.. read moreThanks. I value you reviews more than most.
Sorry about the apostrophe. One day I'll stop consistently f*****g the simple things up. Maybe.
3 Years Ago
(i meant your... my bad. I really didn't do that on purpose, I got two broken fingers right now an.. read more(i meant your... my bad. I really didn't do that on purpose, I got two broken fingers right now and it's not really conducive clean writing at the moment)
After reading this... Your right! It does make sense. Well... the fact that knowing it all, would infact, lose it's value, however, there could be a stage where we use that knowledge to destroy the world before it ever comes to an end. That's what I could get from the poem and I agree with that 100%. Hope that's what you wanted to convey on the whole. I'm not that good yet :p. All in all, a really well written read. Loved it!
Hello, this is Silente... You left me dozens upon dozens of the same reviews when I had to leave for a year, mate... Saying if I came back you would not block me, and you would own up to, and have a public conversation...
You have rescinded on that. Which is fine, but now you attempt to go against your own word...? You block me, make multiple profiles... I get it, you are angry... I am not going to argue the validation, since I was a f*****g c**t to you...
But at least give me a chance to apologize, eh?
Because I DO apologize
I also ask for your forgiveness...
Not for defending people, I mean I can not ever say sorry for that... But in HOW I did it, and how f*****g ridiculous of a level I sunk...
Totally not me, and is probably a reflection of how I was taking things in my personal life at the time...
No... IT WAS a reflection...
IT WAS ME...
No excuse on my part
I would like to offer peace, however if you feel you still need to lash out at, or attack me...
That is your prerogative, and you are probably owed a bit of steam... I hope at some point you un-block me and I am able to further make amends, or read and enjoy your insights in writing without having to make another account in order to do so...
Again, all up to you. You do not owe me or anyone a thing...
You do you
I am not going to bother you or push the subject
You are free to do w/e you would like to me, mate
Good to see you are alive and still kicking
P.S... She knows all my writing, a moot point to talk about more of it with her : /
Perhaps keep your reviews within the same bounds you deem others to stay within when it comes to courtesy in critique...?
If you wanna attack me, I am right here...
No need to involve others hard-work right?
You CAN, I mean, and i am sure will continue to do so...
Just...
I am an open target...!
Pretttty hard to misss...
I guess a target begging is not as fun as a target moving...
Aha
Hmm. Not sure what to say about this one. I admit, I'm not exactly sure what you're attempting to convey here. At first glance, it looks like word salad, but I know it has a deeper meaning. Ordinarily, I can glean meanings from stuff quite easily, but you've stumped me with this one. Good job. :)
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
The vast majority of us are more likely to make up tiny differences from a familiar set of circumsta.. read moreThe vast majority of us are more likely to make up tiny differences from a familiar set of circumstances than ever truly choose to be inherently different. This concept is true across the majority of social situations and is probably why we aren't more objectively collaborative regardless of field... we are too busy justifying our own place and situation than to commit to objectively and altruistically improving it on any kind of large scare
This comment has been deleted by the poster.
4 Years Ago
I see. You sound as though you've dabbled in psychology. That sounds like exactly the kind of explan.. read moreI see. You sound as though you've dabbled in psychology. That sounds like exactly the kind of explanation a psychology student or expert would give. Have you?
4 Years Ago
We all dabble in psychology. You just did it by asking me that.
But whether I did or .. read moreWe all dabble in psychology. You just did it by asking me that.
But whether I did or did not study psychology or otherwise systemically enhance my knowledge in any field is irrelevant.
Does what I have to say have merit or does it not? It it does, why so? If it does not, why so?
4 Years Ago
I'd say what you've said does indeed have merit. In fact, I think I'm one of the ones you've mention.. read moreI'd say what you've said does indeed have merit. In fact, I think I'm one of the ones you've mentioned. I prefer to do my own thing in life. I think we all do to a degree. Some moreso than others.
4 Years Ago
It doesn't really matter either way. Consciousness and material station is pretty much a crap shoot.. read moreIt doesn't really matter either way. Consciousness and material station is pretty much a crap shoot... the spectrum is so wide it's almost impossible to grasp. There once was a time when homosapiens were an endangered species; and what saved us way back then is a set of traits we no longer understand.
4 Years Ago
I agree. We could know everything there is to kinow, and still know nothing at all about anything of.. read moreI agree. We could know everything there is to kinow, and still know nothing at all about anything of any real value. I've always believed that. In any case, have a good night. :)
Knowing everything would probably mean value would lose all value; I will never stop believing that .. read moreKnowing everything would probably mean value would lose all value; I will never stop believing that it's important to be stupid sometimes. If we already knew, meaning would lose it's purpose. Without a cause for effort/struggle there is no cause for life.
4 Years Ago
Maybe. I guess there's no point in worrying about it, right?
4 Years Ago
There's no point in worrying about having no point. It's already a false argument (the question cre.. read moreThere's no point in worrying about having no point. It's already a false argument (the question creates the purpose)… kinda sorta.
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