Redemption

Redemption

A Poem by Livenrite
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For a close friend who went to hell and back...

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Swimming in the big waters 
filled with life, fun, and danger
you take my hand and i follow
denouncing title of stranger

unknowingly, you made me feel like 
your intentions were right and pure 
i don't think of letting go 
as we begin our new adventure

ever so dazed to realize 
that you're taking me too far 
you made me think that i was safe 
seeming so sure about who you are 

you got carried away as well 
you trapped us both in a whirlpool 
it's too late to turn back now 
i begin to see myself a fool 

as we are both drowning 
you finally let go of me 
i push my head to the surface
just maybe someone will see 

i see the coastguard zooming 
i no longer have to fight 
he pulls us both to safety 
and says "it's gonna be alright" 

© 2012 Livenrite


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Added on May 3, 2012
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Livenrite
Livenrite

Brooklyn, NY



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