Desolation

Desolation

A Story by Lizardo

It was a foggy night at Amsterdam, there was a full moon and the time was 7 P.M. 
Nothing special from today I just came from Seattle to check on an airplane at Schiphol
And thought of having a walk through the city 
So there I was, walking normally and I must say that it was very cold until I saw something the freak me out.
In the Distance, I could distinguish a figure watching me... It just stood there watching me for about 10 minutes until I said a word to him
''Hello Mister! Can I help you with something?'' 
He didn't answer a word, he didn't even move a muscle.
I decided to accelerate my walk and get to my hotel fast and then I started running until I stopped by a phone post
The figure was pitch black and he was standing in the balcony of an apartment.
I couldn't see his face or his body, nothing! It looked like a shadow 
''What's the matter? Stop following me'' I said politely
Then things get far worse, the buildings started to freeze and a ghostly sound hollow through the street
The mysterious figure was still standing there, watching me.
I started to run as fast as I could, but I slipped because of the ice and then my worst fear came true
The shadow was standing at about 5 meters away from me. He started to smile with his creepy shark teeth and red eyes. 1 minute pass and then he jumped toward me with a ghostly laugh and I just yelled...
''NOO'' I don't want to say more'' ''everytime I tell the story it always creeps me out!'' Erick said to Detective Frank
''Sir, we need to now all of the evidence of the case!'' Frank said
'But, it's too terrifying to tell'' '' I don't want to say nothing more'' said crying
''Frank he's not going to say anything more'' Said his partner, Montgomery
The police was perplexed by the case, how could this figure even exist? It didn't make sense at all, but frank and Montgomery went to see where the man supossly had been  attacked, And to their surprise, everything was frozen solid, you could barely walk or else you fall down.
Although for their luck, there were two spots where it wasn't frozen, there were steps, probably made by a human
''Frank look at this, it looks like it was made by a human'' Said Montgomery
Frank took out his pocket telescope and look at the steps.
''What ever it was, it was here again not so long ago'' 
''The steps are warm'' Said frank
So the only information that frank and Montgomery had was: a man pitch black with shark teeth and red eyes freezing buildings and walking silently through Amsterdam.

© 2014 Lizardo


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Lizardo
I would like to hear what you think about this story, should i progress? and what should i improve?

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Added on December 12, 2014
Last Updated on December 12, 2014
Tags: Desolation, Story, Investigation, Mystery

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Lizardo
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