Ideas

Ideas

A Poem by Lizardo

The ideas...
The play a big role in our life

It's the light 
That sparks the mind

They come to you with
Grace, elegancy and happines

Without them
What would be of us?

People should respect other's ideas

Because all of the stuff we use in our everyday life

Weren't they built from the idea of someone? 

© 2014 Lizardo


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I like how you incorporated the "there are no original ideas" kind of ideal into it. I hear that all the time from Art Teachers that it's okay to take an idea and build off of it and find ways to make it your own and I like that that's what you've added into this poem to bush the idea to respect everyone's because ideas build off each other. Well done :) I would just suggest to fine tune some of the wording to make it stronger

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

Alright! thank you a lot :)

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