Order (Part 3)

Order (Part 3)

A Story by Lizardo

Our World Is being Ruled by the Power and Gold
 in a world where Love and being healthy are Forgotten Words
The One who rules us, Nobody knows hes name
We are the resistance of this world now
When he took over the world, Chaos Flew up high like a volcano erupting with all its might and power
We are the resistance of this world, We do everything we can to bring the Order Back to our world
We are Being Ruled By secrecy 
The population of the World has decended in to a unbeliavable scale
It's time to Bring the order back and take down the One who caused so much trouble to earth
He Must pay for his crimes Againts the earth.

The Resistance is what they call themselves and they are the last hope to this miserable world

James is the Platinum and our governor is The Power
James has the heart to bring A new World order to Our world

James was Working on the factory, they called him the platinum because of his elegance. He was a hard working men and everyone admired him.
His work schedule had finished and it was time for him to go Home, He was really tired of work and could barely walk, while his friends had the privalege to go on the bus he decided it was a better idea to walk and save his money for his family.
He was a good looking men, tall with dark hair and green eyes and was in thirties.
''I'd better get running or Jaqueline is going to kill me'' he said grabbig air for a while
Their house was one of the poorest in town, they barely could pay water and they didn't have electricity or other house things, they prefered to save the money for their childs School.
The way for James to get home seemed like it never ended until two patrol guards tackle him out of nowhere
''STAY DOWN'' They said almost yelling at james
''WHAT ARE YOU DOING OUTSIDE THIS LATE?'' they asked
''I got out of work late today, I'm sorry it will never happen again'' James said with a calm voice
''DO YOU FORM PART OF THE RESISTANCE?'' 
The Resistance, the only ones in the world who had the power to take down the Governor in the Terra Nova.
Terra Nova is what the new world is called after the governor took over Earth.
''No, I don't'' He said
They puched James in the face and he fell down bleading. James try to scape but they grabbed him from his arm and kicked him in the stomach; He couldn't breath, he fell down and the two guards started to kick him while he was down. 
James layed there badly hurt almost crying. When he heard a Loud noise coming from the right, he tried to get up but he couldn't, then he heard explotions coming from north, south, east, and west. The explotions shook the whole town and the loud noice got closer, it was a hight tech comando car, it looked like a large Jeep.
The misterious car stopped where he was lying down badly hurt, he just saw four guys and two women getting out of the car, one looked like is wife and he Closed his eyes.

© 2014 Lizardo


Author's Note

Lizardo
anything or grammar mistakes that you see, please tell me and will fix it right away or anything that doesn't make sense.

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Horray! I'm first to reveiw:) This is such a good story! Again, all I have to say is that you're a great writer. Never stop writing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

You are very welcome:)

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