Lives

Well God talk to me

Answering my call

Why do I see

Other's people lives 

Seemed more interesting than mine

I'm tired of this mess 

On late night I'm stuck in a gas station

The price of gas keeps on rising

Nothing comes for free

Our lives seemed more interesting

To others

But the truth is, there's nothing interesting

We are just being who we are

There's no one smarter then you

We all are smart...

I'm fed up and I need to go

Well this is turning boring

Round and Round

Nothing interesting

So I watch the news

on the morning

All I see:

Out of gas

Out of car

Out of their minds

I sweet melody plays in earth

We can't heart it...

But It's everywhere

Conecting us all

On how we think

We aren't that different

On what we do

We aren't that different

Science was born

From the observations and experiences

From other people in the past

Today

All I see is people trying to fight

Fight for fun

Just because they want it

Deaths for something wrong

I watch from my window

How other people pass by House

Oh lovely God

How I miss being at home

But yet, I don't even know where my home is...

How to get somewhere

That you don't know if it exist?

We should respecto each other

No always give the bad to our friends

Then God shows up

Answering my call

On a late night

I see moses and the event's of the exodus

The bible and science are the same thing

Both created from observation and past experiences...

We are one

We are Alone

We are together

We are Tired

Tired of this mess up world

There's nothing happy in the news

On a rainy day

Thinking is all I do

We all do that

You aren't human, If you don't think

Oh beautiful fear

Our shadow 

Our ghost

Our darkness

Why do you have to be such a fear?

Oh beautiful happiness

Our body

Who we are

Our light

Why do you have to disappear?

I guess we are all on the same plain of text

Believe or not 

We almost think the same things as other people

But We are different

Because we have different Ideas

Adan backwards

Means in spanish

''Nada''

''Nothing''

The man is nothing compared to god

Eva backwards

Means in spanish

''Ave''

''A bird''

Representing the peace

Other's people lives seemed

More interesting than mine..

Other's people lives seemed

More interesting than mine..

Out of car

Out of gas

Out of Life

Out of mind

Out of news

Out of Us

But the real question is

''ARE YOU HUNGRY?''

Reviews

[Vanesa Markovic]

Some of these stanzas could be their own poems!
Great stuff!
-VM

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much! I really appreciete it

[DoormanDan]

I liked this poem/. What you wrote is 100.1% true, other peoples lives DO always seem to be more interesting than ours, but that's just because we don't know for ourselves what their lives are like. This piece does however have a few typos, and (this is just in my opinion) it's a bit long, and might lose some people's interest. Those aside, you've done a good job once again! :)

[Lizardo]

It's like a list thoughts but I'll make shorter then, Thank you so omuch Dan!

[DoormanDan]

No problem :)

[Jimmy Yetts]

Jacob gives you good advice, Lizardo.
In addition, it seem to me you may have the makings of several poems, here.
Whatever you decide to do, young poet, I did enjoy much of what you wrote.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Frankie, I guess I'll leave it like this since it would be a lot of ideas

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i do see a lot of emotion in this...some powerful lines...i have reread it a few times and am a little lost for a consistent thread---i am wondering if shortening it and maybe tightening a bit might help the reader stay on track...just thoughts...i like the honesty here---the reactions to life.

[Lizardo]

Thank you a lot Jacob, I'll see what I can do
I appreciete your review

[Cool Girl]

Wow, such a powerful and meaningful piece. The emotion is fantastic! Again, you fail to disapoint me:)

[Lizardo]

Thank you So much CG! I really appreciete it :)

[Cool Girl]

I should be the one thanking you:)

[Sami Khalil]

"There's nothing happy in the news

On a rainy day
Thinking is all I do
We all do that
You aren't human, If you don't think"

Always a fresh perspective from you and your writes. Bravo..................

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Sami, I really appreciete it :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..................