Goodbye

Here

Are my friends

Innocents

In this world

Here

I see a full moon

Waiting for me

To go from earth

I take 

the stairs to the moon

with every step

I watch my friends writing

Oh the stars shine tonight

What a joy

It was to be with all

Now its time

to say goodbye

I watch you from these stairs

I will not forget

What you all help me in

Oh, the neon moon shines

I'm waving goodbye

But they can't see me

Oh, theres one friend 

I would like to say goodbye too

Before I go 

(He decends back to a grass field)

(There is a young boy playing with a soccer ball)

(The stars and the moon are shinning)

"Oh dear friend" 

"Where were you?"

"I couldn't find you anywhere..."

"I've been wating to play with you"

(Tears form in my eyes seeing that youn childish face)

"Oh dear friend"

"Lets play, because I have to go"

"You're not going to see me"

"But I will be, in your heart"

(The young boy and me start playing soccer

In the grass field)

(After many laughs and tricks)

(The young boy turns around)

"haha..Friend..?"

"Where are you..?"

"Don't leave me now.."

I stared beyond earth

To my friend

Who has a good soul

Oh, tears form in my eyes

I walk to the moon

Remembering my adventure

The adventure that life has been

I watch my friends

They are all writing

And some are playing

But evertyhing

Has to end....

And I wave goodbye

From these stairs

May we meet

Another day

Just dream

And I will be there.

Author's Note

Kasabian-Neon moon....

Reviews

[Emily]

Lovely poem!!
Well done!!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[Relic]

Interesting poem. Most would use the stairway to heaven to talk to their friends. This is very much like the dreamer, awoken but knowing his dream was real and that a stairway awaits him in the night.

Very good poem.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Relic, I'm glad you liked my poem and thanks for paying a visit here

[Relic]

My pleasure.

[Workvio]

An intriguing write ... Who knows what awaits us on the other side ...

[Lizardo]

True...
Thank you so much Marvin!

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

great flow and awesome write ..... :)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[wordman]

sounds like your on your way to heaven trying to say your goodbyes
a touching write my friend

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much wordman, I'm glad you liked it

[wordman]

you are welcome

[Leviathus Fortes]

Stairs to take you to the next existence.

Looking back at those you leave behind.

Brilliantly told.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Leviathus for stoping by!
I'm glad you liked it

[Jamestown]

Great creative juices flowing, I enjoyed reading this, thanks for sharing, PTL!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it

[Alfred Kukitz]

Hi Lizardo,

What an imagination! I love this poem for its originality. Have you read Octavio Paz? You should!

regards,
al

[Lizardo]

I will read it! Thank you so much for your kind review :)

[Jimmy Yetts]

This work is really quite promising.
Keep at it, Lizardo!
You are going to be someone to reckon with when you hit full-stride.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much for your kind words Frankie!

[W R Stowe]

Very imaginative yet very moving,Makes me begin to wonder about does a departing soul of one whom died think about those left behind and all the yearnings that linger behind.Very nice Lizardo Arias you've done a fine job

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much! I'm glad this came out well

[W R Stowe]

your welcome young man