A Few Thoughts

A Few Thoughts

A Story by Lizardo
"

Useless thoughts or good thoughts? who knows.

"

The first to act 

At a situation of class

Are the ones who will be

Heroes who act with mind

And not with fist and papers

In which are writing big numbers

To rule us all and to keep balance with

The proletariat class in between the breach of the bourgeoisie 

Who are the people who dress weirdly and are known to be the controlled by the papers song that sings at loud at banks robing families and children's life 

 

As rococo has nothing,

Our teens are becoming useless

Technology is your best friend

And mine is too. Sadly……

 

I'm sick of being the ghost of the class

Who nobody notices at day 

I come out at night when they bee me

But there's no room for quiet boy likes here 

Yet some smiles and a pretty face will get you anywhere 

Yeah I'm afraid it's true

 

Useless memories

Useless thoughts

Useless people

Who destroy each other

Like a coliseum 

Who are waiting for their Cesar

To make them be seeing and be rich 

In stupidity 

 

We all go round and round

Infinity a game

What do we really want?

 

© 2015 Lizardo


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As for technology... Its a bad "need" that we don't really need, but then again...we do. What do we want? what do you want? who knows...? not really important, cuz the world makes money to be the golden prize everyone's runnin for. Money=Power. More power, more respect, more everythin of all that we all consider "good". But is it really? well written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A writer

7 Years Ago

I totally agree with Danny. He said all there is to say. It all seems complicated, but in the end, i.. read more
Dani The Unreviewed

7 Years Ago

Thanks for your support. :)
A writer

7 Years Ago

Any time Danny :)



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What do we really want ?
A question inevitable to the human mind.
I like the idea of all this passage ,and the way you passionately distribute your thoughts :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lizardo

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
I like your thoughts! You tend to think a lot, Lizardo. That is a good thing! You will be wise someday.. I enjoy reading about the things you think about. We are very similar. No wonder we are such good friends lol.. Wonderful job, Lizardo. You truly are spectacular :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lizardo

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Aless for this awesome review, you too!! :)
Cool Girl

7 Years Ago

No prob! :) :)
you seem to understand how the popular culture works, and how demanding it can be
let's continue to push against it with writing like this, so that it doesn't continue to control the mainstream


-Dream

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lizardo

7 Years Ago

Of course I do Dream! I read a lot about that (in my search for wisdom of course) so you step yourse.. read more
closed

7 Years Ago

of course
awesome to see you back on here my good friend
As for technology... Its a bad "need" that we don't really need, but then again...we do. What do we want? what do you want? who knows...? not really important, cuz the world makes money to be the golden prize everyone's runnin for. Money=Power. More power, more respect, more everythin of all that we all consider "good". But is it really? well written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A writer

7 Years Ago

I totally agree with Danny. He said all there is to say. It all seems complicated, but in the end, i.. read more
Dani The Unreviewed

7 Years Ago

Thanks for your support. :)
A writer

7 Years Ago

Any time Danny :)

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