Broken

this is very sad. i just hope that the people i love will get back together. :(

Distant stars
Come in black or red
I've seen their worlds
Inside my head

They connect 
With the fall of man
They breathe you in
And dive as deep as they can

There's nothing you can do for them
They are the force between
When the sunlight is arising

There's nothing you can say to him
He is an outer heart
And the space has been broken

Broken
Our love
Broken

Is it far away in the 
Glitter Freeze
Or in our eyes
Every time they leave

It's by the light
Of the plasma screens
We keep switched on
All through the night while we sleep

There's nothing you can do for them
They are the force between
When the sunlight is arising

There's nothing you can say to her
I am without a heart
And the space has been broken

Broken
Our love
Broken

Author's Note

this is an original!!!

Reviews

[Chaz Hemsworth]

The rhymes are all so clever! The poem itself is really sad, and does a great job telling a sad story.

[Tony Larkin]

Absolutely mesmerizing. I loved your rhyme scheme. The poem itself it beautiful. Great job!

[Talia The Hedgehog]

thank you i enjoy a good post every once or a while!