Kill

i don't need you

i am finished with you

what if i needed you do kill me?

dead, for the rest of my life?

would you?

do it cos'

i'm not leaving you.

come kill me

carry me

bury me

killing me

nothing will change

this is who i really am

inside!

yes i know now

this is who i really am!

kill it down!

to the grownd!

cary me

bury me

killing me

hate me!

break me!

love me!

finish me...

Reviews

[L.M.B]

"what if i needed you do kill me?" is it supposed to be: "what if i needed you to kill me?" sorry that was bugging me, great way at showing the mixed feelings

[Ahena MK]

killing me
hate me!
break me!
love me!
finish me...

[Saddam]

would you?
do it cos'
i'm not leaving you.
come kill me
this is very nice poem from you dear... love it. splendid.

[Tony Larkin]

I love your style of writing and the way you emphasize your ideas. Some of the lyrics kind of reminded me of a song I heard once, I think it was called "I Think I'm Paranoid". (and I mean that in the best way possible :])

[Talia The Hedgehog]

yes, i think ive heard it before.. lol

[Chaz Hemsworth]

Well said. That to be human we must experience all the struggles and joys.

[Mind Racer]

I loved it, it showed that you can't break or kill what is inside. You can't change who you are. Amazing!

[Kai Rollins]

Minor typo in line 3.
Besides that.
That contradiction....how humanic.
Great job

[kublakhan27]

Definitely a dark work but poetry is not for the faint-hearted anyway haha Nicely done.

[Talia The Hedgehog]

thank you. i made this because for some reson i was listening to Breaking Benjamin and made up some words.