Monster

Monster

A Poem by Talia The Hedgehog

The secret side of me
I never let you see
I keep it caged
But I can't control it
So stay away from me
The beast is ugly
I feel the rage
And I just can't hold it

It's scratching on the walls
In the closet, in the halls
It comes awake
And I can't control it
Hiding under the bed
In my body, in my head
Why won't somebody come and save me from this?
Make it end!

I feel it deep within,
It's just beneath the skin
I must confess that I feel like a monster
I hate what I've become
The nightmare's just begun
I must confess that I feel like a monster
I, I feel like a monster
I, I feel like a monster

My secret side I keep
Hid under lock and key
I keep it caged
But I can't control it
Cause if I let him out
He'll tear me up
And break me down
Why won't somebody come and save me from this?
Make it end!

I feel it deep within,
It's just beneath the skin
I must confess that I feel like a monster
I hate what I've become
The nightmare's just begun
I must confess that I feel like a monster

I feel it deep within,
It's just beneath the skin
I must confess that I feel like a monster
I, I feel like a monster
I, I feel like a monster

It's hiding in the dark
It's teeth are razor sharp
There's no escape for me
It wants my soul,
It wants my heart

No one can hear me scream
Maybe it's just a dream
Or maybe it's inside of me
Stop this monster!

I feel it deep within,
It's just beneath the skin
I must confess that I feel like a monster
I hate what I've become
The nightmare's just begun
I must confess that I feel like a monster

I feel it deep within,
It's just beneath the skin
I must confess that I feel like a monster
I'm gonna lose control
Here's something radical
I must confess that I feel like a monster

I, I feel like a monster [4x]

© 2014 Talia The Hedgehog


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I love this song! I could hear it in my head when I read this. ^^

Posted 10 Years Ago


Talia The Hedgehog

10 Years Ago

yeah. i found it in one of my files and i thought i might post it
Bluefire

10 Years Ago

You did a great job! ^^
Good song. Good times...ahh Skillet

Posted 10 Years Ago


Talia The Hedgehog

10 Years Ago

i used to work for them. i worked on the lights when they went to seatle (somewhere around there)
I love this song! Awesome! It is a pretty awesome song and I really liked that you posted the lyrics on here!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rhyming and beat are awesome. I love the intesity of the message.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was so intensely sad and heartfelt.Well penned .

Posted 10 Years Ago


Talia The Hedgehog

10 Years Ago

we all have that feeling sometimes
Way to steal Skillet's song.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Talia The Hedgehog

10 Years Ago

sorry. i forgot. no offense. do you want me to like, delete this er something?
Erik Daniel

10 Years Ago

I'm not gonna make you do anything. I'm not mad. I'm just saying it's not cool to steal other people.. read more
Talia The Hedgehog

10 Years Ago

sorry. i didn't think that anybody knew that they made this song. heck i didn't even know. sorry 4 b.. read more
I have always had a soft spot for these types of poems, loved it! Reminds me of the song, Monster, by Imagine Dragons. Great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Talia The Hedgehog

10 Years Ago

here is one of my videos i made. it is clashed with my song and the Ninja Turtles sorry,
http:.. read more
Mind Racer

10 Years Ago

That was a great song! Loved it, listening to it over and over.
Talia The Hedgehog

10 Years Ago

ok. thanks. download youtube magic and put it on repeat. that is what i'm doing. LOL
I feel it deep within,
It's just beneath the skin
I must confess that I feel like a monster
I'm gonna lose control
Here's something radical
I must confess that I feel like a monster

I, I feel like a monster [4x]
Great write, intensity of feeling, extreme desire to transfer message is crystal clear, please don't let the monster out when I am nearby, scared of monsters and darkness, enjoyed

Posted 10 Years Ago


Linda alexander

10 Years Ago

OK , so better I keep a safe distance, thank you for warning me in advance
Talia The Hedgehog

10 Years Ago

lol. TOATALLY!
Linda alexander

10 Years Ago

Take care..., keep writing
"I feel it deep within,
It's just beneath the skin
I must confess that I feel like a monster
I'm gonna lose control
Here's something radical
I must confess that I feel like a monster

I, I feel like a monster [4x]"

A powerful and monstrous poem...Bravo.................

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Yep. You are welcome...:)........................
Talia The Hedgehog

10 Years Ago

thanks.
now i won't bite you.
-or will i?-
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

:).........................
Feels like this could be a great song!
Sometimes there's a monster inside of me too.
Loved it :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Talia The Hedgehog

10 Years Ago

i know. i think we all have a monster. most of us cannot control that power and unleash it. FURELUSL.. read more

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Added on February 15, 2014
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Talia The Hedgehog
Talia The Hedgehog

United Kingdom



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My name's Talia and I am a big fan of Ticci Toby, Lost Silver, Manic the Hedgehog, Silver the Hedgehog, Espio, and Shadow. I like a lot of things and if you are reading this, don't look out your windo.. more..

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