I Know

I know I'm not a good poet
and it really does show it
but I need to write of all my pain
this is what I hope to gain
being here with people who write better than I do
I only hope that I can one day soon I can do as well as you

Reviews

[Ellie Qtz]

I feel I am at a similar stage in my poetry, and I'd love to see more of your work, I actually have a poem a bit like this!

[Jack...]

So this is what you do when you miss the bus?

Lola, your are a very fine poet. You write from somewhere deep inside and you do it well. Don't ever let anyone tell you anything differently, not even yourself.

[lolawants]

teehee, i wrote it before but not really sure if i should show people, thanks! :) your a nice man