The End of It

The End of It

A Poem by Rosey

I wish I could be mad at you.
For letting me set myself on fire to keep you warm.
For simply standing so close,
Silently absorbing the intense heat that radiates from my love.

I cant.

I emerged from our ashes brand new.
With startling focus.

And I truth, I must apologize in advance,
For I think in time you will realize
I've left you quite cold and a bit dusty.

You see, fires that are not tended to, burn out.

© 2015 Rosey


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"I emerged from our ashes brand new.
With startling focus."
A good poem with some good lines. Bravo......

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Clever poem flows well and I get it..nice job Rosey

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree.
"You see, fires that are not tended to, burn out."
Nice flow of thoughts led to the perfect ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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