Why Criticize

Just a random one that I wrote along time back. Not the happiest of poems, but real.

Damnation is a coordinate taker

Not everyone is prosperous who tries

Open up and you will see

Remembrance can be the ultimate faker

This is the way it has to be
 Everyone will have demise

 So Why Criticize?

Reviews

[Legion]

So true. Short, simple, and to the point. I like it.

[Mark D. Chevalier]

I took this as statement of life, and a bridge to things that happen whether we want them to, or not.

It was poetically short, flowed smoothly, and you made your point well. Nice poem!
M