The Time Keeper

The Time Keeper

A Poem by Morgan Storms

My first draft, thoughts welcome.

The time Keeper
Divide the helix of time
Leave heartache filed in 
The library of the past
For art's sake we create
We are visionaries in our present
In which the world unfolds
The hourglass is nothing more
Than time-turned on itself
Creating limits in our future
The pinnacle of progress
Is in the luxury of ordinary minds
An intellect that is ageless 

© 2017 Morgan Storms

Author's Note

Morgan Storms
Just a first draft

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So far so good I always say but later as you run it through your mind you'll come up many words that will make it better, you may go through many draft's before you're satisfied. Keep on writing and thank you for sharing

Posted 1 Year Ago

SO very nicely written, enjoyed this. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago

Strong statements left something for the reader to think about.
"For art's sake we create
We are visionaries in our present
In which the world unfolds"
I agree and I liked the lines above. I wanted to read and know more. Thank you Morgan for sharing your amazing poetry.

Posted 4 Years Ago

Excellent story. LONGER please. The direction you are going you have a willing follower

Posted 4 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Morgan Storms

4 Years Ago

I promise that I will work on it! :)

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4 Reviews
Added on August 14, 2017
Last Updated on August 14, 2017
Tags: Time, Keep, Keeper, Divide, Future, World, Art, limits, heartache, Library


Morgan Storms
Morgan Storms

Sedona, AZ

Its obvious that I like to write! I am a word nerd. I am a dictionary reading, poetry writing, novel idea loving, paranormal romantic of sorts. more..


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