Losing Steam

Losing Steam

A Poem by Jack
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Where do we go? what do we say? what do we do? It is all right in front of you

"

We all dream. Only violently eyes open, see.

Inside, break opaque thoughts haunt.

Brain knots, past taunts, future jaunts. 

Hear feeling within, here feeling without.

© 2011 Jack


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Such a tender balance and depth to this :)
Perfect! I adore this :)
xx

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on March 22, 2011
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Tags: sadness; angst; life; live; insi

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Jack
Jack

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I live in the U.S.A. I began writing my Sophomore year of high school. I love writing, drawing, and playing music with anyone who can hold a beat. I am motivated by the feeling, although elusive, when.. more..

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