My love for you.

When I wake up
The first thing I think
is how is she doing? is she even up ?
the last thing
I think about at night
is how is she doing ? is she think of me?
am I going to dream of her?
will she dream of me?
is this a dream?
Will I wake up?
I want to wake up one day
And the first thing I say it good morning to you
Then I want to one day go to bed
and have the last thing I say is good night to you
Of I could and if you would let me
I would hold you till the end of the day and just look at you
I wish I could be there every time you shed a tear
every time you cannot sleep
every time you get hurt and every time you feel alone.

Reviews

[Lord of mad men]

yeah i kind need to slow down when i write but thank i will try to find time to fix it maybe thanks!

[R.Guy Behringer]

Really heartfelt. Needs some punctuation and spelling edits though. I'm sure I have the same probs. Lol