twisted fate

we are two old souls

bond together by

the strings of fate

in this web of life

to old souls

bond to love

live and loose

fate brings them

together then tears

them apart

fate is twisted

Reviews

[Bonnie Paige]

Touched by the subject matter. Simple and can understand the purpose the poem has been written.

[Silmara McGarry]

Really great poem! Sadly one way or another separation will take place and the tears are inevitable.

[Lord of mad men]

yep thats is why you make the most of what little time you have with those you love and those who love you. thank you very much for reading my work!

[Angel of the devil]

this is a great poem. i like it. being immortal, i have seen many of my love ones die. enjoy the time you have with your love ones

[Lord of mad men]

thats is the one part of being everlast thats is bad

[Angel of the devil]

yep............

[Howard Savage]

Great poem. Into each life some rain must fall, fate is a troublesome thing. All I can say is enjoy the time you have on earth, for the inevitable can't be changed.

[Lord of mad men]

great thing to do thank you and so true