Cloud 9

“She fills my heart with joy and lifts me higher than I ever thought possible…”

I noticed her post on the web last night

it sounded so pure, so honest and right

It starts with a spark, to ignite the fire
as she writes of her dreams and her heart’s desire

Her words are so clear, honest and deep
I need to know more, I’m unable to sleep

I finally hit send, to respond to her quest
she replied to my message, and now I can rest

Kindred souls, destined to meet
as we write back and forth, my heart skips a beat

What is this feeling, of this I’m unsure
I know that it’s something, I need to know more

The excitement is growing, was this meant to be
two souls reaching out, for the universe to see

She’s shy at first, but her joy is true
we write back and forth, exciting me too

The world disappears, as does the time
I know in my heart, this MUST be cloud 9

Reviews

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Great poem! The rhyme and the story was really nice. It was inspiring!

"The excitement is growing, was this meant to be
two souls reaching out, for the universe to see." Fave line!

[Ricele DaSilva]

This is beautifully written, very well put together and easy to read.

[matrixmark]

This reminded me of a tme of yesteryear of how I came to meet my best friend who is now my wife. You brought back some great memories for me with this piece.

Mark.

[Lorna Lee]

Thank you Mark, that is what makes it so special to be able to express these things in writing as I am sure I'm not the only one to experience it. I'm so happy you were able to get something from it.

~Lorna Lee

[matrixmark]

I most definately did get something from it. Believe me when I say - this piece put a great big smile on my face and I thank you for that.

Mark.

[Lorna Lee]

:-) Your Welcome...