the best summer

the best summer

A Poem by Love Demon


I swam in the most wonderful lake,
feeling the water rushing over my body,
the sunlight hitting on my face,
the sounds of the splashes and joy from the children
it was like a dream come true,
like the best summer ever.
I looked over the city that was below,
looking at that beauty made my eyes dazzled,
the sunshine made the city more enjoyable to look,
I promised myself I ouldn't foget this amazing day,
the best summer will always be in my memory.

© 2012 Love Demon


Author's Note

Love Demon
Please ignore the word that's missing a "w".
Please tell me what you think ^_^

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Wow, great poem :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


I loved the imagery in this too, love. It was amazingly written. I liked the picture too. o:
Keep writing. You're great at it. Thanks for sharing. :D

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is a really vivid poem, and a nice picture too. Great write, and kudos!
100/100

Posted 7 Years Ago


Incredible pic, summer is the best, sweetest memories, wishing it were here already, but great description ;)

Posted 7 Years Ago


OMG WHERE DID YOU GET THE PICTURE????

PM me cause I can't get reply notifications

VERY nice poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


Love Demon

7 Years Ago

Lol thanks :)
Steven Cash

6 Years Ago

np @ all

(sorry for replying soo late. I had a glitch, and was never able to see you re.. read more
Nice poem... Thank you for sharing ... The pic is good too...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Love Demon

7 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome.
great, i love summer and you just reminded me what i look forward to after school. i wish it where summer, but for now I just keep reading this poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Love Demon

7 Years Ago

why thank you!! :D
That is a wonderful poem. I like it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Love Demon

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
i like the pic.....
wish summer could last forever...but it wouldnt be all that memorable if it happened everyday.
beautiful description.

viva

Posted 7 Years Ago


Love Demon

7 Years Ago

Thanks :D
Descibing a great day in a wonderful way, nice.

( you do know you can edit your poems right..?)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Love Demon

7 Years Ago

Thanks
Yeah, I know I can edit this, but I'm using a iPad right now, I'll fix the errors later.. read more
Broken Soul

7 Years Ago

Aha i see, sorry for being the smart a*s i am ^_^
Love Demon

7 Years Ago

Your alright ^_^

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Hiya, names Hexctan! :DDDDDD I'm a 16 year old girl that loves to review other writers work and write poetry and books. As you can see I am a crazy kingdom hearts fan XD I do love anime, a.. more..

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