Never Give Up

When things get tough I promise to never give up.

When I find the time to relax, I am asleep

The things in life don’t go right, I get frustrated

It doesn’t ever seem to get easier

But I know when things are tough, I am learning

I know I sometimes act out of control

I can’t promise to always be good

Emotions are my weakest link, I don’t know what to do

I can never seem to keep them controlled

They take control, its hard not to give in

But when it comes to life I guess you have to stand up, even to yourself.

Author's Note

Never gunna give up :)

Reviews

[❀ Gabriela ..]

Wow, I love this!! Wonderful message, and I love how you've written two poems in one. Really brilliant!

[Jeffery-Maximilian-Kolb..]

Great Write !

[☮Lizzie❤]

yes that is very true. be true to who u are

[hmm]

I really enjoyed this piece, this is wonderful.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The riddle within a riddle rises form the screen and gives us all something to think on, well done, good read.

[Tim Lion]

I like it. I dig the poem within a poem.

I found one little weird spot:
on line 8, I would change "can't" to "can"...takes out the double-negative and gives more clarity.

Nice piece.
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