You say You have Nothing

I read a poem, and this is what it inspired.

You say there is nothing left

Just fragments of old memories

A lost and forgotten dream

But you don’t seem to realize

The things you have yet to feel

To see!

 

You say that you can’t stand the silence

Then stand up and scream

The anger and frustration

Let it pour into this room 

Like   a waterfall let it go

 

And when the noise stops

Listen to the eco

For you can fill a rom 

You can do whatever it is you dream

A dream is but an idea

A thought 

 

Live your life as if you where sleeping

Don’t worry about tomorrow

For tomorrow may never come

So sit beside me

Feel my warmth 

Let me take you to a another world

 

Just close your eyes and live

Feel the pleasure like non-before

So when you say you have nothing left

Remember you always have me

Weather to be comfort

Pleasure 

Pain if you wish

I will always be something

Irreplaceable and strong

 

So take a seat and remember me

I am more than nothing

And I will never leave you 

Alone. 

Reviews

[AK]

Very nice! Wonderful wording!

[Raindrop]

Encouraging, but at the same time it is romantic! This poem is for a loved that is down, and it will definitely get their spirit back up!

[Vertigoingnowhere]

wow this is great!!! i love this! good job! mind checking out some of my stuff? thanks

[Jeffery-Maximilian-Kolb..]

Wonderfully Worded and Awesomely Proclaimed.

[25syd25]

Amazing

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Clear and guided, great wording, well done, good read.

[MandaBear]

Great write keep it up :)