True Love

True Love

A Poem by Riya_love is language of life

description of true love according to me..


 In this beautiful gift of life
 we make a numerous friends

 we earn a lot of wealth
 we laugh whenever we feel like
 we cry a several times

 we rise to the top a many time
 we fall down each time we rise up
 But, there's one thing which we get only once in a lifetime..
 and that is TRUE LOVE!!!!

© 2008 Riya_love is language of life

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Your writing is very simple. Good. That is the way to write. Keep it simple. Simple writing is great writing. Use powerful verbs and few adjectives. Your poem is very good. But It would be a lot stronger, if you changed, " we fall down each time we rise up" to " we fall to the bottom a many time" Symmetry in writing is beautiful.
Your use of we is very good. Very strong and builds energy. Keep writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on August 3, 2008


Riya_love is language of life
Riya_love is language of life

Kolkata, India

I'm a girl of 14...and i love writing a lot...things come into my mind any time..maybe when i'm studying..chatting or even when i'm taking a shower...other than that i love singing and painting too..... more..