Resurrection

Resurrection

A Chapter by luciddreamer

          There is nothing sadder

                                       I must say

           than a human who is dead, yet

        still breathes,

      with a heart that is beating.

One who gave up on dreams

                                  as well as themselves

                  who lives in solitary

even when others are around

          the

    fear

                             insecurites

                  darkness

           lonliness

and pain

                        is just to much to bare

 

but somehow

   if you can put just one

      foot in front of the other,

         if you can make just

                                one more wish

                                      once more upon a star,

            if you can just give,

                        even when you feel

      you have nothing left to share

                             you will find your life is worth living againl     

 

 



© 2010 luciddreamer


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Yes. One has to go There to find It.
Those who don't, appear to live, but are cadavers.

I would drop the last line.

Posted 13 Years Ago


your poetic is an inspirational beacon for those lost within their own shadows~beautifully composed~

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thats so beautiful, and the format enhanced this artistry, Great Poetry

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Your on an insightful roll at the moment...loved it..hope is wrapped up nicely in an inspirational poem..

Posted 13 Years Ago


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very affirming-i took much from this-
it's sad that some miss the meaning
of a such a intrinsically profound write...
(great poem) (:


Posted 13 Years Ago


totally loved it!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


That's the spirit! Great formatting that goes with flow of the words.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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luciddreamer

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